Tuesday, October 19, 2010

A Poemside Chat: Take Two

I haven't started a new story yet. It's not there, and I don't want to force it. So... poetry! That's right, my friends. When the story is still wisps and smoke and not quite graspable, I say, "'Ello inner poet, bring your quill and enjoy some Moosetracks ice cream with me." Here is the inner poet's latest creation:


Phoenix

By Samantha Bennett

Beauty,

Tucked in the ashes,

Hidden among the smolders,

Glowing and remembering,

So bright, so free.

Memories,

Harden and form,

With dashes of light,

Swelling from the dust,

Unfurling, like petals from a bulb,

A phoenix.

15 comments:

Jennifer Shirk said...

Oh, my gosh, that's beautiful! Did you write that recently?
PS. I'm a BIG Moosetracks ice cream fan! It's my all-time FAV.

Kristi Helvig said...

I've never heard of Moosetracks ice cream but I LOVE all things ice cream. Lovely poetry--that's a great idea to keep writing even if a book idea hasn't hit you yet. :)

Kittie Howard said...

What a beautiful poem!!

I've also never heard of Moosetracks (hmmm, what planet am I on)...but indulge in a few more scoops and let the ideas flow!

Melissa said...

The imagery in this is gorgeous. Wow. Seriously. I wish I could write poetry, it's so evocative. Or maybe thats just yours....

Samantha Bennett said...

Jennifer Shirk: Yippee! A fellow Moosetracks fan!

Kristi Helvig: Oh, Kristi. If you like ice cream, you must try it!

Kittie Howard: Thank you so much!

Melissa: Gracias, amiga!

Cindy R. Wilson said...

Pretty :) That's a great idea to write poems to fill in that in-between stories place. Keep your creativity going.

Lydia Kang said...

Lovely. I think writing poetry makes for better prose writers too. You go!

Samantha Bennett said...

Cindy R. Wilson: Yes, anything to keep the creativity churning!

Lydia Kang: Thank you, amiga!

Talli Roland said...

Beautiful. I love the unfurling image at the end!

lotusgirl said...

I love me some moosetracks. Yum. Beautiful poem. Nice.

Rachna Chhabria said...

Samantha..you are tempting me to write poetry now, and let me tell you that I am no great poet.

Beautiful poem.

Heather said...

I love it! I wish I could write poetry, but alas, it is not in me!

Samantha Bennett said...

Talli Roland: Thank you!
lotusgirl: Always nice to chat with a fellow Moosetracks enthusiast.
Rachna Chhabria: Write away!
Heather: Maybe deep down... :)

Jo Schaffer said...

I like that. Good imagery. Tasty wording.

Mike Meraz said...

lit on fire